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Some people think that it is a good idea of all employees to wear a uniform at work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Uniforms can be identified as one of the most vital requirements of an employee in certain job roles. Some people are considering that all workers should wear a uniform at work. From my perspective, I strongly agree with
this
 statement
due to
 many reasons, following essay will discuss
this
 in detail.
Firstly
, a certain dress code
is segregating
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 an individual from the other general community,
such
 as police personnel, military armed forces and health care assistants.
For instance
, the public can easily reach a person from a security
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, even among a humongous crowd because of their attire when they need help,
hence
this
 is a kind of sign for people to identify them easily.
Secondly
, some job roles require specific attires for people to perform their tasks properly.
For example
, fire brigade professionals need their special set of clothing to wear
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when they are on duty. It helps them to act faster and provides them
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 safety they need
while
 they are at a job. Same way,
this
 is a necessity for most
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the
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careers
such
 as safety helmet is vital for engineers
while
 they are at construction sites.
Furthermore
, special attires sometimes act as a sign for specific situations.
For example
, airport ground workers who are wearing colourful fluorescent jackets provide special signals to air pilots when the ground is clear.
In addition
, these special uniforms will reflect a bright light during the
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, so anyone can see them clearly from wherever they are. In conclusion, most
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the
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professionals need
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some kind of a dress code
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 safety measures, identification purposes or to perform duties well.
Therefore
, I strongly agree that everyone should wear a suitable outfit for their jobs.
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