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Some people say smoking should be banned on public places. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

#people #places
smoking
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Smoking
 in public places
are throught
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is thought
are thought
 by some to have had
detrimental effect
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a detrimental effect
detrimental effects
 on
people life
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a person's life
person's life
the person's life
.
However
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believe that smoking in public places not only affected the
somkers but
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smokers, but
smokers but
also
 non smokers including children as well as women.I completely agree that making a healthy nation all types of smoking should be banned in open places.
To begin
 with, smoking pollutes the environment of public places which invites diseases for both smokers as well as
non smokers
a person who does not smoke tobacco
nonsmokers
 and suffer respiratory problem, heart disease, cancer and so on that result
numerious
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
 people are losing their lives in every year. Albeit
,
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,
they are not responsible for
this
. When a person
,
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,
for example
,
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,
smokes
a person who smokes tobacco
smokers
 in a bus station where other people standing or sitting beside him become affected. Smoking in public places
,
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,
moreover
,
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,
encourage
people especially
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people, especially
 teenagers to develop their habit of smoking in them.
Therefore
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,
addiction towards
this
 injurious habit rises. Apart from
this
,
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,
smoking in public places may cause
fire
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a fire
 which may result in huge loss of lives and property.
On the other hand
,
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,
some smokers may argue that they
have right to smoke
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have a right to smoke
 in any places as they think that they are not doing any criminal offences by smoking in mass place.If smoking is banned in open places.
Their
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They're
 right
,
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,
therefore
, will be curtailed. Some smokers have taken it as a mean of fashion who have not any consciousness and knowledge about their lives and gradually damage important parts
from
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of
 their bodies that they
can not
can not
cannot
 understand
.
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.
Finally
, children always follow their parents and imbibe their near and dears habit. To conclude,
although
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,
smoking in public places
are
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is
 responsible for pollution and diseases to a great extent.
Furthermore
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,
it can
supersed
take the place or move into the position of
supersede
 large number of people from their main business and responsibility of the society.So, executive bodies should be banned smoking
,
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,
for
instance cigarette
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instance, cigarette
, as all types of smoking ingredients from
public place
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a public place
public places
the public place
.
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