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write a letter o your friend in foreign country, write that you are planning a holiday . write in your letter that why you are planning this trip what are your plans for it ask your friend to join you for the holiday

#friend #country #holiday #trip #plans
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I HOPE YOU AND
YOIUR
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YOUR
 FAMILY IS DOING WELL. IT IS BEEN
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A LONGTIME
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LONG TIME
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LONGTIME
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LONG TIME
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 SINCE WE HAVE NOT SEEN
EACHOTHER
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EACH OTHER
. I WAS THINKING TO PLAN A TRIP TO REDUCE MY WORK STRESS. I AM HAVING A LOT OF
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WORKLOAD
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WORK LOAD
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WORKLOAD
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 AT
JOB
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MY JOB
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 SO
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 WILL BE A MUCH NEEDED BREAK. SO THAT I CAN FRESHEN UP
MY SELF
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MYSELF
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 AND CONCENTRATE ON MY WORK EFFICIENTLY.
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 IS WHY I HAVE DECIDED TO
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VISIT
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VISITE
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VISIT
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 CANADA. I HAVE PLANNED TO COME TO CANADA ON 12 OCTOBER FROM INDIA.
T WILL
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TWILL
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 BE REACHED THERE ON 13 OCTOBER EVENING AT 5 PM.I HAVE PLANNED TO STAY WITH YOU FOR A WEEK,
MEANWHILE
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 WE CAN EXPLORE THE CANADA. WE CAN GO TO SEE A VERY KNOWN PLACE CALLED ZOO. I HAVE
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HEARD
HEARED
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HEARD
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 THAT IT HAS DIVERSITY IN ANIMAL
SPIECES
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SPECIES
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ALSO
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 WE CAN GO TO SEE NIAGRA FALL IN TORONTO AS
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 IS THE FALL SEASON SO, THE
SCENERIO
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SCENARIO
 WILL BE A AMAZING
AT
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 FALL.
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 FOR THE
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 ONE
WEEK
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 I HAVE PLANNED TO
VISITE
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VISIT
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 ALBERTA MY AUNT'S PLACE. I WOULD BE
AGREAT
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GREAT
A GREAT
 IF YOU WILL ABLE TO
JOINE
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JOIN
JOINED
 ME FOR
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 TRIP. AS WE CAN HAVE AN OPPORTUNITY TO SPEND SOMETIME TO WITH EACHOTHER AND ENJOY.
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ALSO
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 IT WOULD BE NICE IF YOU COME TO ALBERTA WITH ME. YOU WILL HAVE
CHANCE
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A CHANCE
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 TO TASTE THE AUTHENTIC INDIAN FOOD WHICH MY AUNT COOKS. I WILL BE WAITING FOR YOUR POSITIVE RESPONSE. SEE YOU SOON THERE. WITH BEST REGARDS
SEFALI
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SHEFALI
 PATEL
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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