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I HOPE YOU AND

YOIUR

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YOUR

FAMILY IS DOING WELL. IT IS BEEN

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A LONGTIME

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LONG TIME

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LONGTIME

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LONG TIME

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SINCE WE HAVE NOT SEEN

EACHOTHER

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EACH OTHER

. I WAS THINKING TO PLAN A TRIP TO REDUCE MY WORK STRESS. I AM HAVING A LOT OF

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WORKLOAD

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WORK LOAD

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WORKLOAD

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JOB

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MY JOB

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THIS

WILL BE A MUCH NEEDED BREAK. SO THAT I CAN FRESHEN UP

MY SELF

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MYSELF

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AND CONCENTRATE ON MY WORK EFFICIENTLY.

THIS

IS WHY I HAVE DECIDED TO

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VISIT

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VISITE

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VISIT

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CANADA. I HAVE PLANNED TO COME TO CANADA ON 12 OCTOBER FROM INDIA.

T WILL

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TWILL

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BE REACHED THERE ON 13 OCTOBER EVENING AT 5 PM.I HAVE PLANNED TO STAY WITH YOU FOR A WEEK,

MEANWHILE

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WE CAN EXPLORE THE CANADA. WE CAN GO TO SEE A VERY KNOWN PLACE CALLED ZOO. I HAVE

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HEARD

HEARED

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HEARD

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THAT IT HAS DIVERSITY IN ANIMAL

SPIECES

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SPECIES

ALSO

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WE CAN GO TO SEE NIAGRA FALL IN TORONTO AS

THIS

IS THE FALL SEASON SO, THE

SCENERIO

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SCENARIO

WILL BE A AMAZING

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FALL.

THEN

FOR THE

ONE

WEEK

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I HAVE PLANNED TO

VISITE

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VISIT

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ALBERTA MY AUNT'S PLACE. I WOULD BE

AGREAT

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GREAT

A GREAT

IF YOU WILL ABLE TO

JOINE

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JOIN

JOINED

ME FOR

THIS

TRIP. AS WE CAN HAVE AN OPPORTUNITY TO SPEND SOMETIME TO WITH EACHOTHER AND ENJOY.

ALSO

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IT WOULD BE NICE IF YOU COME TO ALBERTA WITH ME. YOU WILL HAVE

CHANCE

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A CHANCE

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TO TASTE THE AUTHENTIC INDIAN FOOD WHICH MY AUNT COOKS. I WILL BE WAITING FOR YOUR POSITIVE RESPONSE. SEE YOU SOON THERE. WITH BEST REGARDS

SEFALI

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SHEFALI

PATEL

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

243 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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write a letter o your friend in foreign country, write that you are planning a holiday . write in your letter that why you are planning this trip what are your plans for it ask your friend to join you for the holiday

The Greeting

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many people think that painting and music do not directly improve the quality of people. Therefore, government should not spend too much money on artistic projects. Do you agree or disagree?

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society? You should write at least 250 words.

People in many countries are spending less time with their families. What are the reasons, and effects of this