There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear sir/madam, I am writing to inform you regarding improper
bus
service in my city from
last
two weeks. Being more precise, the buses are not arriving on time at any place for the whole day. Sometimes it used to arrive early than regular time. I work in lively and my home is in LaSalle Sudbury. I am using your
bus
service because, there are no other economically affordable way of travel to lively. I must be at my job by 9:30 am but, Whenever the
bus
is delay from my home, I used to miss 9: o’clock
bus
from the transit and once I missed, need to wait for the two hours. Due
this
I am being late at my job every day which is affecting the office workflow. What I suggest is that install GPS tracking system on for each
bus
so that person can track the
bus
schedules and position. Other way is that schedule more buses with half hour interval
instead
of 2 hours. I hope you will consider my problem as yours and will do something to solve it. Waiting for your positive response to
this
public issue. Thank you, Sefali Patel
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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