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today high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Modern world
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The modern world
has became
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has become
 a world of advertisements.We come across
variety
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a variety
 of advertises in our daily life. I completely agree with the fact that these advertisements have a
uge
unusually great in size or amount or degree or especially extent or scope
huge
 role in selling of many consumer goods which are not actually required by the society.
Firstly
, with the advancement in
technology ads
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technology, ads
 have
became
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become
 a part of our routine which can not be neglected. Various mediums like Tv
,
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,
newspapers
,
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,
internet
,
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,
long hoardings on
road
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the road
,
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,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
 are used to attract the customers. The promotion of many products
are done
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is done
 by famous celebrities who have huge fan following. All these have a definite impact on consumers who come across these ads quite often. These certainly motivates them in buying products which are of little or no use.
Other
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Another
 important factor affecting is the pace at which technology is growing. Many electronic gadgets become obsolete within
few months
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a few months
 and the new ones with better specifications take their place. The advertisers play a vital role in magnifying its significance resulting in great response from the consumers.
Also
, certain goods are projected as
status symbol
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a status symbol
status symbols
 by the ad makers. People are made to feel as if they need to buy them just to prove they belong to a certain class in the society. Advertisers know the attitude of their customers and they are aware how to increase the demand of their brands. The growth and demand of certain brands like apple
,
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,
gucci
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Gucci
,
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,
nike
(Greek mythology) winged goddess of victory; identified with Roman Victoria
Nike
 and many more clearly back our argument because all these brands launch their products with a successful ad campaign leading to it.
Thus
,
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,
technology and the image of
brand
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brands
 are used as effective tools by marketers.
Finally
, to
conclude I
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conclude, I
 completely agree with the fact that advertising can lead to
high
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higher
 sales even if these goods are not the primary requirements. The main reason behind
these
denotes a person or thing
this
 being the skills of the advertisers in attracting customers by the brand’s image and various sources.
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