The table below compares actual and predicted figures for populations in three different cities. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given table indicates actual and estimated
figures
for citizens
in three various cities
, namely Sao
Paulo
, Jakarta
and Shanghai in the years 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, it is obvious that the number of
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actual
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the actual
population
in 1990 was lower than the number of that in 2000 in the two cities
Sao
Paulo
and Jakarta
. The figures
for predicted citizens
in 2000 were much higher than the figures
for citizens
in fact in all three cities
shown.
To begin
with, actual
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the actual
population
in Sao
Paulo
and Jakarta
in 1990 was 15 million
people
and 9.5 million
people
respectively, they were lower than actual
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the actual
population
in 2000 in these two cities
. While
,
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actual
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the actual
an actual
population
in Shanghai in 1990 was 13.5 million
people
, it was higher than the figure for actual
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the actual
an actual
population
in 2000, with only 12.5 million
people
.
In 2000, the number of predicted citizens
in Sao
Paulo
was the highest, with 24 million
people
, but, in fact, Sao
Paulo
only had 18 million
people
. The figures
for estimated citizens
in Jakarta
and Shanghai were much higher than the figures
for citizens
in fact, 14 and 17 million
people
compared to 11.5 and 12.5 million
people
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