In many countries, people have more health problems because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. What do you think are the reasons for this and how can it be solved? Give relevant examples from your experience.
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health
issues because people choose living to unhealthy lifestyle
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essay will ponder upon these responsible factors and its solution.
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eat
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more that home made food
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every day
health
related propblems
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health
diseases. That's why they have many health
problems in many countries.
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an unhealthy lifestyle
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countries, some people
lived
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health
problems Because industrial areas are very polluted area with harmful chamicals
or smoke. relating to or used in chemistry
chemicals
Hence
it is justified that they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle
.
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, some steps can curb these problems.firstly
, people Suggestion
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outght
to be avoid outdoor foods which create more and more expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
ought
health
problems like as food
poisioning
or more the physiological state produced by a poison or other toxic substance
poisoning
health
diseases. A part
from it, people should be lived into neat and clean areas and government make some rule which can stop pollution from anywhere. Suggestion
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Hence
it is justified that people can follow some rules or avoide
some foods which create diseases.
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