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In many countries, people have more health problems because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. What do you think are the reasons for this and how can it be solved? Give relevant examples from your experience.

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It is seen that in many nations, people have more and more
health
 issues because people choose living to unhealthy
lifestyle
 in
thesedays
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these days
.
which
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Which
 has
plethora
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a plethora
 of reasons.
This
 essay will ponder upon these responsible factors and its solution. A prime reason of people
have
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has
 more
health
 issues in many countries is that they
eating
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eat
 to outdoor
food
 more that home made
food
. Because, In these days people have lack of time
therefore
 they used to eat outdoor foods
everyday
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every day
. By which they face some
health
 related
propblems
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
 in their life style.
A part
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Apart
 from
this
 some working persons eating
to
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of
with
into
food
 which make
at
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in
 their workplace. With with they have
health
 issues sometimes.
for
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For
 example, some
food
 surface areas are not neat and clean where are many
gearns
a contest with rules to determine a winner
games
genes
 which can create many
health
 diseases. That's why they have many
health
 problems in many countries.
Another
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Other
 contributing factors for people choose to
living
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live
unhealthy
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an unhealthy lifestyle
lifestyle
 is that in many
countries some people
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countries, some people
 lived in societies and some are
lived
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living
at
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in
 industrial areas. Because, some people to like
lived
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living
 near at their workplace. By which they can easily up and down on their workplace. To better exemplify, some
person
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people
 work
at
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in
 factories or industries
therefore
 they live industrial area.
where
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Where
 people have more
health
 problems Because industrial areas are very polluted area with harmful
chamicals
relating to or used in chemistry
chemicals
 or smoke.
Hence
 it is justified that they choose to live an unhealthy
lifestyle
.
However
, some steps can curb these problems.
firstly
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Firstly
, people
outght
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
ought
 to be avoid outdoor foods which create more and more
health
 problems like as
food
poisioning
the physiological state produced by a poison or other toxic substance
poisoning
 or more
health
 diseases.
A part
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Apart
 from it, people should be lived into neat and clean areas and government make some rule which can stop pollution from anywhere.
Hence
 it is justified that people can follow some rules or
avoide
stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
 some foods which create diseases. In conclusion,
although
 Person who
choose
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chooses
rto
in the direction of
to
 live an unhealthy
lifestyle
 has many
advers
contrary to your interests or welfare
adverse
 effects on people or society.
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Both
Butte
 can be seen that there are some solutions of
this
ploblem
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
. These problems can solve
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for
 people and government both.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • technological advancements
  • fast food
  • processed food
  • dietary choices
  • stressful work environments
  • neglect
  • health education
  • consequences
  • advertising
  • health programs
  • active living
  • policies
  • availability
  • nutrition studies
  • conducive environments
  • pedestrian areas
  • media campaigns
  • healthy lifestyle
  • risks
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