It is inevitable that as technology advanced, traditional cultures will be lost. It seem that we cannot have these two thing together

The coexistence of modern
technology
and traditional cultures is the topic which we need to concern about today. Some people consider that the more
technology
is grasped, the more traditional
culture
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cultural
values are lost. I strongly disagree with
this
point I believe that both of them will develop in harmony together.
To begin
with, the evolution of
technology
brings us tremendous benefits. But we cannot deny the negative effects of
technology
to the
tradition
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traditional
.
As a result
of
humans technological
Accept comma addition
humans, technological
dependence, many traditional values have lost.
Instead
of spending
weekend
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weekends
to gather together or having dinner with family, some people go to their room to immerse in their own world which is on the internet.
In addition
, children and youths are usually obsessed
by
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with
modern things; they prefer playing video games, watching TV to studying a traditional
culture
.
On the other hand
,
technology
is contributing to promote classical cultures. It is possible to know the cultures of every region or country by using the Internet or watching TV. Unlikely about 30 years ago, we had to hear it from our grandparents or travel to that places to know their
cultures
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culture
. Beside,
technology
also
helps us in reviving damaged cultural heritages or
reappearing
restore by replacing a part or putting together what is torn or broken
repairing
them.
For example
, the Institute of Imperial Citadel Studies and Academy of Social and Science have used 3D
technology
to restore the Ly
dynastys
a sequence of powerful leaders in the same family
dynasty
dynasty's
architectures for demonstrating and researching. The combination of
technology
with tradition has created particular cultural values which make youths feel more excited in studying
culture
. They will realize the beauty and importance of classical civilization, thereby promoting traditional
culture
. The Quintessence of Tonkin is a particular instance for the mixture of
culture
and
technology
. The
culture
of
Northern Delta region
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the Northern Delta region
is reproduced in a genuine and exclusive ways in the sequence of lights and sounds. They show the beliefs and spirit of
Vietnamese
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the Vietnamese
in
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
, education, knowledge, village associations and the arts as sculpture and architectures.
Finally
, the most importance is that despite the effects of
technology
, the core values of traditional
culture
will never change. All Vietnamese are always brothers; we grew up from rice and had a passionate patriotism.
Technology
will help us to retain it and deliver to the
next
generation. As technological developments, the traditional
culture
will be preserved and heightened.
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In
conclusion, traditional and science can coexist, tradition is always an endless inspirational source for
technology
while discoveries of
technology
reinforce the values of traditional cultures.

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