In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

In some countries adolescences

are prefer

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are preferring

prefer

are preferred

to

work

or to go aboard for a period between finishing high school and commencing

university

educations. Sometimes

this

situation

have

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has

advantages as well as disadvantages. In

further

I will discuss both views and come to a final conclusion.

Firstly

, we have to choose a

field we

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field, we

prefer before starting

university

studies.

furthermore in

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Furthermore in

birth-hood some people think to be

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engineer

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that

case before

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case, before

entering to

university

studies, going to a

work

in that field will be an added advantage for their higher

education

. Most of the time in

universities we

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universities, we

can gain only theoretical

parts but

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parts, but

after completing

degree

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a degree

and working in a field may be

stuff

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stuffed

.

Moreover before

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Moreover, before

appearing to higher

education

,

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,

young people should encourage to

work

or travel for

year

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a year

years

so they can identify the real situation. In

further

it will help them to take correct decision to choose their higher

education

.

Secondly

,

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,

this

period

also help

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also helps

them to get the idea about the

society

. In schools they were limited to same kind of age limits students

only but

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only, but

if they

work

or travel after finishing high school and before commencing their

university

education

, they can

meetup different

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meet up with different

meet up different

experiences with various types of people, cultures, attitudes

,

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,

and cultures etc.

In contrast

,

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,

as same as advantages there are disadvantages too. In their student life they have less responsibilities and duties to

do but

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do, but

when they released

to

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into

society

, they have to face more responsibilities and duties. Sometimes

this

may feel them more stress

,

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,

home sickness, isolating problems from families and friends or fear to face

society

at once. In

conclusion by

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conclusion, by

encouraging young people to

work

or travel between starting universities and finishing high school, will help them to build their future pathway successfully.

Moreover it

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Moreover, it

is help

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has helped

their to get

general idea

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a general idea

the general idea

of the

society

.

too

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Too

.