The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

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This
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line graph presents the
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of visits to
Australia
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by foreign citizens per year
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the table specifies the visits per country that took place in the year 1975 and 2005. There has been a gradual increase from 1975 to 1985
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the
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doubled from 1984 to 1995 as seen on the chart.
However
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, compared to 1975, in 2005 the
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of foreign
visitors
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has increased drastically (Total 8.8 in 1975; 30.4 in 2005).
Furthermore
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, an interesting fact is that among the six
countries
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given, South Korea and Japan had the most
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of foreign
visitors
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to
Australia
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in 2005 compared to 1975 (South Korea: 2.9 in 1975 and 9.1 in 2005; Japan: 3.2 in 1975 and 12.0 in 2005). Meanwhile, China having had 0.3 million people visiting
Australia
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in 1975 but 0.8 million in 2005 which is quite less in terms of changes that took place over the years compared to other
countries
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over the past years.
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, compared to 1975 the
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of foreign
visitors
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has been increasing, reaching quite a high
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of
visitors
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of 32 million to
Australia
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while
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having a majority of
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from South Korea and Japan.
On the other hand
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, the least
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of travels was from China but it is safe to say that the majority of the visits to
Australia
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were from Asian
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than Western
countries
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, australia, visitors, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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