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In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reason for this and how can it be solved?

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Nowadays, people in certain countries got
health issue
Suggestion
a health issue
 because they prefer to live in unhealthy ways.
This
 is clearly evident that unhealthy way was born because of furious of
life
rhythm
. When
time
 is limited person has not
time
 for everything, namely food, dream, sport
ect
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act
.
However
, people can control everything if their get
motioand
the use of movements (especially of the hands) to communicate familiar or prearranged signals
motioned
mentioned
motion
 wants to live till 100 years old. These day humans
chasing
pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives
choosing
 a money due to their forget about own type of
life
. Money
have occupied
Suggestion
has occupied
humans
Suggestion
human
human's
 brain,
consequence people
Accept comma addition
consequence, people
 have not seen basic things like
health
,
rhythm
, relationship. When people have a limit
in
Suggestion
on
 the
time
their
people in general
they
 prefer do not cook at home,
instead
 prefer to take away fast food. There
are
Suggestion
is
 some trend that some people gaining relaxation from drinking alcohol every evening.
Moreover
,
these
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
thus
 all aspects cause a problem with
health
 where in some
case
Suggestion
cases
disease
Suggestion
the disease
 can be uncontrollable. Despite all aspects of unhealthy
life
 everyone have
time
 to change type of
life
. All people who have crazy
rhythm
life
 should reconsider and redo all the plans.
Firstly
, restrict all factors which destruct their
life
 like unhealthy food, less physical work. People should interact with other people and be sociable, participate
to
Suggestion
in
 cultural events where
their
in or at that place
there
 can take more knowledge or something
significant
Suggestion
significantly
 new. Sport have to be included without discussion, because sport
give
Suggestion
gives
 us
capability
Suggestion
the capability
 to manage own body.
Furthermore
, scientists
says
Suggestion
say
 that sport stimulates to discipline. To conclude, all
health
 problems
depends
Suggestion
depend
 on
rhythm
Suggestion
the rhythm
 of
life
.
However
, that dynamical
life
 cause a lot of problems with
health
, but the person can manage own
time
 and can divide
likewise
 all issues can be disappear.
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