People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the modern era, after a
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of difficult stages today, people were able to obtain
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the chance
of to work and
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inhabit or live in; be an inhabitant of
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where ever
they want thanks to
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technology and
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. There has been a remarkable increase in the
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of people who believe that
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has more benefits than drawbacks, while another section of society think that disadvantages of
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outweighs
the advantages. In
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before drawing a reasonable conclusion. In my
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,
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has not only advantages but
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disadvantages but
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disadvantages, but
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of benefits more than
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the drawbacks
. Admittedly, there are two key advantages of developments in the
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and
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area.
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is that people who work in developed countries might be more succeed than others thanks to these developments. A good illustration of
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, according to a report published by the New York Times, employees who live in foreign countries are more successful because they can access their families and friends due to the development of
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they want and they can access anywhere through either planes or fast railway systems. If there were not these systems, they would not go anywhere apart from their countries.
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, these developments have many benefits than drawbacks. Despite these arguments, there are
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various disadvantages of
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the development
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systems and
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. Perhaps the main disadvantage of
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people
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person
can not establish effective
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working
relationships through technology,
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, most
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employers
today recognize that real interviews are more effective than
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, applicants should be prudent concerning the their interview processes.
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has been developed, plane tickets still expensive other vehicles,
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a bus
or train in developing countries. Even though a
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of measures have been taken to prevent these problems, the problems have not yet been solved. To sum up, it must be said that people have different views concerning the negative and positive aspects of technological developments’ effects on businesses. My
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view is that though some negative aspects which these might be perilous on employees’ career,
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has
more positive aspects than negatives.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • communication technology
  • transportation
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • freedom
  • work and live
  • development
  • increased job opportunities
  • flexibility
  • work-life balance
  • cultural exposure
  • diversity
  • economic growth
  • globalization
  • social isolation
  • loneliness
  • loss of community
  • sense of belonging
  • expensive cost of living
  • housing
  • strain on infrastructure
  • resources
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