Some people think that money is the best gift to give to youngster while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
People assume that giving
money
is the greatest gift
for new generation
.WhereasSuggestion
a new generation
the new generation
,
at the same time other people are not Accept space
,
concuring
with the given statement.Having occurring or operating at the same time
concurrent
money
boosts number of illicit activities among adults alongwith
Suggestion
along with
unresponsibility
.a form of untrustworthiness; the trait of lacking a sense of responsibility and not feeling accountable for your actions
irresponsibility
However
,
nowadays youth taking benefits from steeply increasing in Accept space
,
bussiness
subjects for making their bright career after graduation.a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
Additionally
,
lots of Accept space
,
money
sometimes make
them Suggestion
sometimes makes
leasy
moving slowly and gently
lazy
easy
,
Accept space
,
unskillful
as well as poorly done
unskilful
uneducated person
.
As the matter of factSuggestion
uneducated people
,
some parents Accept space
,
chosing
cash for giving as a pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives
choosing
chasing
gift
.They believe,
it is quite Accept space
,
cosy
to make them happy.He\she will buy any thing according their own wish.Indeedentailing great loss or sacrifice
costly
,
miserlyAccept space
,
,
sometime it gives horrific result through Accept space
,
engagging
their own self in gambling and taking drugs.attracting or delighting
engaging
For instance
,
a boy who got Accept space
,
money
from his parents for celebrating his birthday party with pomp and show.But,
he Accept space
,
disburse
his Suggestion
disburses
money
to palying
the act of playing a musical instrument
playing
paying
a
Blackjack and having intoxication with their friends.
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
On the other hand
,
Accept space
,
number
of young man and women are saving their currency for taking avail in future regarding Suggestion
the number
a number
assist
in professional life after Suggestion
assisting
passed
his\her graduation or masters.Suggestion
passing
Justlike
Suggestion
Just like
,
my bosom friend who has done her BBA and started her own Accept space
,
bussiness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
(
a boutique).By the wayAccept space
(
,
she got a handsome amount of Accept space
,
money
as a gift
during celebrating her success(
completed graduationAccept space
(
)
Accept space
)
Inspite
ofSuggestion
In spite
,
spending Accept space
,
money
on variant useless un
activities.
As the best of my notionSuggestion
UN
on
fun
,
I would like to say thatAccept space
,
,
parents and other people should give those things as a Accept space
,
gift
which is reliable,
keep prevent our youngsters from illegal deedsAccept space
,
,
give help to make them as a good human or citizenAccept space
,
,
responsible as well as pull their self to polish his\her skills in a sagacious way.Accept space
,
Justlike
Suggestion
Just like
,
buying laptopAccept space
,
,
books for them.Accept space
,
Moreover
,
giving a library or Accept space
,
gym's membership card
as a Suggestion
the gym membership card
gym membership card
presedent
.Parents can be able to arrange a trip or an example that is used to justify similar occurrences at a later time
precedent
president
present
picnic
for their child which is really Suggestion
a picnic
wise way
to give surprise them.Suggestion
a wise way
Thus
,
you can spend lots of time with your family and make them happy too.
In conclusionAccept space
,
,
gifting Accept space
,
money
is sometimes creates fuss and massiveness in adult's life
which is dreadful Suggestion
the adult's life
an adult's life
also
dengerous
for them.involving or causing danger or risk; liable to hurt or harm
dangerous
dangers
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