Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying products (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment.) Do you agree or disagree?

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It is thought by some that

price

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is the most important factor to consider while making

purchase

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purchases

of products and services

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as a cell

phone

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or a medical treatment respectively. In my opinion, I feel whether the

price

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is to be regarded as the most important thing or not, depends on the purpose of the facility we want to buy.

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price

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certainly plays a crucial role as a factor to consider, when buying a material

product

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such

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as a cell

phone

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, which are bought to make calls.

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is mainly because, with an increase in

price

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its

the thing named or in question

features increases. A cheap cell

phone

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for instance

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, comes with a low-quality pixel-camera, while the camera quality improves with a high-end mobile

phone

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costing more. So, the

price

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has to be taken into account while purchasing material products. Another reason why

price

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ought to be considered as the most crucial aspect while buying a

product

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is simply to avoid over-spending on a less worthy

product

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, prices for most manufactured products are not fixed and the same

product

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can be bought in/at a cheaper

price

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if bargained,

therefore

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, help saving money.

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moreover

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, prevents victimization of the customer by fraudulent sellers, who wants to sell the

product

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at an expensive rate.

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, when purchasing a service,

such

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as a medical treatment, which could impact health directly,

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price

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the price

is certainly not the priority. The reason for

this

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is that life

cannot be put

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cannot put

at stake for the prices of the services, and cheaper medical procedures are, unfortunately, less likely to achieve the best result. In

such

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cases, the quality of the service or

product

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should replace its

price

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as the top priority. To conclude,

although

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price

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can be negotiated when considering purchase of material products which have no direct effect on health,

services

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service

affecting life should not be calculated and matched with their costs.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

317 words

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Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying products (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment.) Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Due to poorer countries wxperiencing a brain drain they are seeing many professionals, such as doctors and teachers, leaving to work in more developed countries. what problems does this cause? What solutions can be suggested to deal with this situation?

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.