Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museum
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The museum
is often known as
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‘The
Treassure
accumulated wealth in the form of money or jewels etc.
Treasure
House’
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Entry tickets to some museums are cost-free
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whereas
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a vast majority of them require to pay money. In my opinion
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the advantage of
charged
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charge
access to the museums
such
as improved
maintainance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
Montanans
do not weigh
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does not weigh
against a major disadvantage that people may consider alternate leisure places. Admittedly, the peak advantage is that the income accumulated from the visiting public allows to invest in better
maintainance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
of the diverse paintings, stunning artefact and the magnificent novels of the
museum
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Moreover
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it is by far well known that the government funds contribute very little to not to popular places like the museums.
For instance
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London
museum
of arts imposes its visitors a certain amount for their admission.
As a result
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they are able to invest in infrastructure and is enormously admired for its architecture.
Therefore
, the
museum
attracts tourists from far and wide.
However
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the drawback to implementation of permit charge to museums is overwhelmingly distressing. If people were costed to gain
accessibility
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access
to comparatively less fun sectors like the
museum
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they would
instead
opt to go to a park or any other places which is much more enjoyable at with a similar investment. For illustration, statistics revealed
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visitors to an adventure park in India spiked up while
number
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the number
of people visiting the
museum
hit a downhill after the
museum
introduced priced tickets to view the exhibition.
This
situation raised a potential concern leading to reconsider their decision. To sum up, I believe, the advantages
such
as improvised
maintainance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
under power the disadvantage that other places would be considered for entertainment
incase
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in case
of
charged
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charge
admission to the museums.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Admission fee
  • Revenue stream
  • Maintenance
  • Overcrowding
  • Commercialization
  • Cultural heritage
  • Diverse attendance
  • Community ownership
  • Access to culture
  • Visitor experience
  • Exhibit quality
  • Cultural mission
  • Reliance on funding
  • Government subsidies
  • Cultural accessibility
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