At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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It had recently argued that the
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of younger people in some countries is higher than the older people.
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it is believed
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increase will boom the economy and flourish in the country due to the interfering of
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in employment, others believe that it will harm the country’s infrastructure
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as education and
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sectors. On the one hand, many economical experts believe that the rising
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of
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will have a greater impact within a country.
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rise will lead to improve many sectors,
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as: water,
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and technology, as many fresh graduates will compete to get the desired job.
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, each graduate will give a motivated idea that leads to flourishing the country.
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, China is struggling from the large
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of its population, its
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had made a competition
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year, especially for
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In order to solve the pollution problem.
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, many young people were attending
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contest and providing the
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with many solutions that had been used later by the
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.
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, it is believed by some that universities will not be able to have
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tremendous
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of youths at classes.
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,
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will harm the educational process as not less than 100 students will be
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attending one
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, the pressure will be more on hospitals by
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people as the
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of doctors is declining.
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, China again had been countering a severe increase in the
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of
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and admitted that not everyone could have the
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insurance, so their
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decided to
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a rule that every couple should not
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bear
more than one child. To conclude,
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a higher number
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of
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will lead to a successful economy, it is believed that
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successes
success
will have its obstacles. And
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the main problems would be summarized in the squeezing on
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institutions and schools.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic
  • workforce
  • productivity
  • innovation
  • skilled labor
  • social development
  • technology
  • dividend
  • competition
  • resources
  • social welfare
  • unrest
  • instability
  • healthcare
  • elderly care
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