Nowadays some countries are spending lot of money to make it easier to use bicycle.why is it so?is it the best solution to transport problem

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Traffic is the biggest problem in the world which people facing.These days few nations spending
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of money for using
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and it is
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an
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suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc
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solution to face transporting system. To being with
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and foremost people buying bicycle easily because it is not much expensive and people
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do not
waste their money on fuel which was very harmless for
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the environment
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the problems regarding Heath issue will reduce owing to the usage of bicycle the can doing
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the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
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the feel very comfortable they
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do not
suffer any Heath problem
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as heart problem, cancer.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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