Individuals can improve the environments. Some people say that only governments and large companies can make difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In the
last
decades, the
environment
has been suffering due to many human and non-human factors. Some people believe that only
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
and some large organizations have real ability to enhance the
environment
around us.
This
essay will
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
why governments and large companies are
entierly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
entirely
the ones who can improve the
environment
significantly. It is undeniable that human intervention is one of the most challenging
factor
Suggestion
factors
in the eco-system balance. As human being
sometimes act
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sometimes acts
recklessly and carelessly despite the unseen the combined risk.
For example
, a smoker can start a fire without intent by a throwing the little tiny remaining of his
ciggarette
finely ground tobacco wrapped in paper; for smoking
cigarette
cigarettes
.
This
example
calrify
Suggestion
clarifies
clarify
the needs of having institutionalised authorities
such
as
governements
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
government
or large
comapnies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
. They can issue
regulation
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regulations
a regulation
and bylaws to mitigate the adverse impacts of human intervention. Companies as well can apply some work standards
inside
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in
their workplace to protect the
environemnt
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
or reduce the
emmision
the act of emitting; causing to flow forth
emission
emissions
.
For example
the can build a point system that
deduct
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deducts
certain points for any violation
to
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of
the
environment
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environmental
standards.
In
addition governments
Accept comma addition
addition, governments
and large companies have the power and tools to summon people and make new eco-friendly practices and trends in the society. Overall, a
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
and large companies can easily prioritize nation's goals towards making the
environement
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
cleaner.
However
, it should not be forgotten
taht
pointing out something
that
individuals have
also
impact
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impacted
on the
environement
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
There is live evidences from all over the world
taht
pointing out something
that
individuals can put pressure on governments and large companies to adopt new changes in their policies and strategies to
protest
shield from danger, injury, destruction, or damage
protect
the
environemnt
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
. Most of us saw that 16 years old activist who came all the way up from Norway to give a speech at the United Nations summit
last
August.
However
, from
individual's perspective
Suggestion
the individual's perspective
an individual's perspective
, large change could be eventually
acheived
to gain with effort
achieved
if every individual
adjust
Suggestion
adjusts
his own daily routine in a sustainable way,
such
as using less water.
This
essay agreed that the major change can only be accomplished by
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
and large companies
becasue
for the reason that; on account of
because
they can easily take fast and
magnifecent
characterized by grandeur
magnificent
steps towards the sustainability of our world and our
environemnt
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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