Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result.Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

I am writing
this
letter to help and give immense support for the upcoming charity event which I have seen in a local newspaper.
Firstly
, I would love to help the charities since my childhood, the reason for
this
much interest is because of my close friend.He had lost his parents in a road accident since
then
he was raised and taken care by the MyHomeHub charity. The circumstance in those organizations is close to my heart. I have had enough experience in the past with the charity events and their organizing as well. When I was in secondary school, with my classmates, we started an organization to give foundation to the destitute children's. I have been closely involved with that organization from the foundation day onwards.Hopefully, we will continue
this
in future as well. I would like to reinforce
this
event by providing some financial help, by collecting a various things from the donation company, and social advertising so that across the globe will get the enormous support for
this
event.
In addition
to that, there are some special organization, in which they voluntarily give support by providing books, clothes and other basic necessities for the kids. I have the contacts with those companies will share those details soon with your team.
yours
Suggestion
Shareef
sincerely, shareef

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