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Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The encouragement of living away from home or stay with family is debatable. Many parents believe that it is much more effective way to make their children responsible while others do not.
This
 essay will discuss both
side
Suggestion
sides
 of argument in detail and provide evidence that why living alone is superior. On the one hand, living away from loved ones make young generation more responsible in terms of time and
money
.
This
 is because
firstly
, managing
house hold
a social unit living together
household
 chores
such
 as cleaning, cooking and so on along with
job
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the job
a job
, make someone more disciplined and matured towards
life
.
Moreover
, spending
money
 while thinking twice to become financially stable till the end of
the month teach
Suggestion
the month to teach
 them
money
 management.
Hence
, by becoming independent and more responsible they could take care of themselves and their future family without any support. One the other hand, children who live with
family
Suggestion
the family
 might be morally and mentally stronger than
others
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others, however
however
, love and
money
 given by parents make them stubborn and irresponsible. Though, they could handle their bad times of
life
 with confidence and full support of other
members but
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members, but
 sometimes they forget to respect the valuable things they got without any struggle in
life
.
Therefore
, parents should not provide everything desired by children without knowing the good or bad consequences of it. In my opinion, youth without their family build confidence in their
life
 which helps them to live in a better way in the competitive world.
Hence
, parents should support or give enough courage to their children who want to spend their
life
 alone in any form
such
 as boarding schools, college hostels, higher studies in abroad, overseas jobs and so on to become a better person.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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