Many people buy new phones or laptops to keep up with the latest technology. Is this a good or bad thing ?

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When discussing the issue of keeping up with the latest technology, one should bear in mind the complexity of the issue.
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many people think that frequent replacement of technical instruments,
such
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as phones and laptops, is required in order to enjoy the
lates
up to the immediate present; most recent or most up-to-date
latest
lots
updates in modern technology, I believe
this
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approach is bad
to
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for
our
environment
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and should be neglected. In
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essay, I will provide reasons and examples to support my view. One argument in favour of my position is that increased consumption of electrical machines
have
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has
a negative
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
on our
environment
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and natural resources.
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, the increased
minning
the act of extracting ores or coal etc from the earth
mining
of
sillicone
any of a large class of siloxanes that are unusually stable over a wide range of temperatures; used in lubricants and adhesives and coatings and synthetic rubber and electrical insulation
silicone
silicon
selection
for the production of computer components, has increased the air pollution in the African states by more
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then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
2%.
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, due to the massive use of
sillicone
any of a large class of siloxanes that are unusually stable over a wide range of temperatures; used in lubricants and adhesives and coatings and synthetic rubber and electrical insulation
silicone
silicon
silicones
, there is a worldwide shortage of the natural element.
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example shows that buying new computers and mobile phones have a poor
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
on our
environment
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, and should be regulated. Another point supporting my opinion is that the technical differences between the models is minimal, and most of the regular users do not require these features.
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, there is no need to replace a new phone or computer regularly. To illustrate, Every year Samsung releases a new phone. In the
last
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5 years, most of the differences focused on optimizing the camera and touch screen, differences which are hardly
noticable
capable or worthy of being perceived
noticeable
to the user and have no
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
on the functionality of the phone.
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demonstrates, that many times new models offer minimal changes which have no consequence to the user, and so there is no need to buy a new device. In conclusion, I maintain that buying a new product in order to keep up with the latest technologies is harmful to our
environment
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.
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, many times it has absolutely no
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
on our daily use, and so there is no justification to spend money on the new product. We should concentrate on how to save our planet, and not on a new
compter
a machine for performing calculations automatically
computer
.

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