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People believe that in order to reduce road accidents it should be mandatory for drivers to retake the driving test every 3 years. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

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Nowadays, there is a belief that if we can take strict observations over skills of
driver
Suggestion
the driver
 after a prerequisite time, it may lead to a reduction in road
casualities
someone injured or killed or captured or missing in a military engagement
casualties
. I
’m completely agreed
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completely agree
 with the viewpoint of re-verifying driving capabilities after every three years, which may result in reducing road fatalities.
This
 essay will embark upon the need to retake the driving test and its implication.
To begin
 with, people’s driving habits always tends to get modified with time
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e.
it
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It
 has tendencies to either get improve or deteriorate.
Second
, a check after three years will act as an audit plan and awareness program to find out abnormalities in the driver’s skills especially and methods to improve them. To cite an example, the Canadian Government implemented a rule that a driving license will be updated after every five years along with a test, which resulted in reduction of road
casualities
someone injured or killed or captured or missing in a military engagement
casualties
.
On the other hand
, the introduction of rules for verification of driver’s abilities to ride a vehicle will result in anger and disappointment against the government, rather than focusing on the benefits individuals will take it as a waste of their precious time.
This
 will cause an unnecessary halt in transport schedules and business which will impact the economy. To illustrate, the Government of Delhi, issued a rule to stop the vehicles whose driver’s license is 10 years old to re-verify the details, resulted in havoc at check-in points. To recapitulate, I agree with the ideology of
rechecking
any process in which electrons are added to an atom or ion (as by removing oxygen or adding hydrogen); always occurs accompanied by oxidation of the reducing agent
reducing
driver’s ability
Suggestion
the driver’s ability
 to decrease in highway fatalities,
this
 will have its positive effects in a small period, if implemented carefully with the flexibility to citizens.
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