Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the main problems faced by the world today is climate challenges.

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some people believe that the major environmental challenge is the extinction of some particular types of

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and

plants

, some are of the opinion that we have more critical environmental situations.

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essay is going to explain these two opinions and my belief will be added. On the one hand, environmental pollution

result

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results

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in the disappearance of some specific

plants

and

animal

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in the ecosystems.

This plant

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These plants

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and

animal

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animals

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go into extinction because the environmental

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has become unfavourable for them to thrive and live in,

such

environmental conditions include soil contamination, water pollution, global warming and air degradation to mention a few.

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, wildlife who live and

dwells

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in the polar region are reducing day by day and will soon be totally absent

due to

global warming

that is

melting away the ice in

this

region. The loss of different living things can be prevented if we pay more attention to conserving our planet.

On the other hand

, there are more pressing issues that result from our habitat pollution. The life span of human beings is reducing rapidly and

this

is a major problem caused by environmental degradation.

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same way

plants

and

animal

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animals

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are affected by the poor condition of the environment, humans are equally affected too. For illustration, several diseases and

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have been traced to the presence of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere, thereby reducing the number of years of humans. Health challenges resulting from

environment

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deterioration should

also

be paid more attention

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In conclusion, the world we live in, is important for

plants

, animals

as well as

human beings. Many

plants

and animal breeds are lost and

this

is a top environmental problem that some people recognise

while

others believe there are more important challenges. I believe every part of the ecosystem

that is

lost, including

plants

, animals and humans

are

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all significant.