The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree and disagree?

It is irrefutable fact that over the past few decades, technology has
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
every aspect of our life; shopping is one them. It is argued that
increasing popularity
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the increasing popularity
of
ecommerce
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eCommerce
will obliterate the physical shopping. It is possible that most of the
brick
and
mortar
shops within town and city
perish
a local church community
parish
,
however
customised and personal
product
provision shop will sustain.
ecommerce
Suggestion
ECommerce
Commerce
Ecommerce
has affect
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has affected
the
business
of almost every physical shop in towns and cities and some of them has already
perish
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perished
.
For instance
, the Blockbuster, which was the world leading retailer for selling and renting
cds
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CDs
/DVDs
for
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of
in
the tv series, films, games and other entertainment products, has bankrupted because of the online streaming services. Bookshops are
also
effected
sevierly
to a severe or serious degree
severely
by
ecommerce
transactions (sales and purchases) having the objective of supplying commodities (goods and services)
commerce
.
few years
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A few years
Few years
ago There were three to four books shops almost in every
broadway
a street in Manhattan that passes through Times Square; famous for its theaters
Broadway
high street or shopping mall,
however now
Accept comma addition
however, now
it is very difficult to find the
brick
and
mortar
shop for books only.
Wsmith
someone who works at something specified
Smith
, which is the leading bookstore once, has
also
changed its
business
by selling grocery, food and drinks by reducing the book section within their stores. Almost every
business
has adopted the
ecommerce
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eCommerce
business
model. All the giant
retail
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retailers
such
as: Walmart,
Next Tesco
Accept comma addition
Next, Tesco
, Sainsburry, Morrison and many more
also
sell products online. Considering the current trend, it can make you believe that
brick
and
mortar
shops
wil
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
shut down one day,
however
it may take some more decades to happen.
Although
All those shops and stores which provide the ready made products are
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
by The online
business
, but personal shops
such
as tailors for customised and personal suiting and clothing are
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
the least and will survive. A study by the London
Business
School concluded that ready made
product
provision businesses are almost
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
by 40% of their
business
and personal
product
provider only effected by 5% of their
business
because of the
ecommerce
transactions (sales and purchases) having the objective of supplying commodities (goods and services)
commerce
eCommerce
.
Study
Suggestion
The study
explains that
ecommerce
transactions (sales and purchases) having the objective of supplying commodities (goods and services)
commerce
has less overhead and operational costs,
therefore
, it
offer
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offers
the low
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the lowest
lower
prices to their
customer
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customers
,
however
personal
product
buyer
do not care
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does not care
for price rather 100 percent satisfaction. In conclusion, low price and high variety of
products
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product
availability
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available
through online shopping can
wipeout
Suggestion
Wipeout
wipe out
physical shopping in
few decades
Suggestion
few decades, however
the few decades however
the few decades the few decades however
a few decades however
however
personal shopping will survive in
brick
and
mortar
shops.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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