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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there is more advantage to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

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Home is the
one
 of the common comfortable place for everyone,
therefore
 they are dreaming to buy a place for living that should establish into the home. Some people like to live in their own
house
, while others living in a building. As living in a
house
 or a
qaurter
one of four equal parts
quarter
culture
courtier
 has its own pros and cons.
This
 essay will throw some light onto both arguments and will discuss living at home is more advantages than an apartment. On the
one
 hand, nowadays many people prefer to live in
an
Suggestion
a
 flat for various reasons.
First
 and foremost is that, now people have more busy life, so they have to travel for work or study on a daily basis. So they do not worry about the security as it is safe as security guard always sits in at the main gate of the building.
For instance
, pupils can play in the compound ground without any risk of security.
Moreover
, people can go for long journeys without worried about safety of their home.
However
, but living in the building does not provide privacy, they find it difficult and
also
one
 do not aware of the surroundings. Other the other hand, living in
house
 has its own merits.
Firstly
, it provides enough privacy and space for the each and every member of the family. So they do not have any botheration of private life as each member has his own room and children have enough place to play freely without any restrictions.
Furthermore
, the people who have gardening as a hobby, can fulfil by planting trees and crops in the courtyard in a
house
.
Moreover
,
one
 can keep pets in a
house
 which do not possible with
an
Suggestion
a
panthuse
an apartment located on the top floors of a building
penthouse
pantyhose
. To conclude, every person has his own choice to live in a
house
 or an apartment. As living in
ahouse
Suggestion
a house
 has more merit overweigh the merit living in the building. I personally believe that living in a
house
 provides you more privacy and your hobbies to keep alive.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • privacy
  • maintenance costs
  • upkeep
  • amenities
  • security
  • lock-and-leave lifestyle
  • commute
  • affordable
  • shared walls
  • suburbs
  • outdoor area
  • restrictions
  • responsibilities
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