Some people believe that protecting environment is the government responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take the responsibility for it . Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Few individuals think that
environment
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should be protected by the
government
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, many feel that responsibility should be taken by every person
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This
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essay will highlight both opinions and
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elaborate how
administration
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the administration
and person play an equal role in maintaining the
environment
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. In order to save the
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environment some
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environment, some
steps should be taken by
government
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. They should apply rules and regulations and take strict actions against lawbreakers.
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, Smoking
cigarette
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cigarettes
a cigarette
at
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in
public places should be banned as it causes noise pollution
moreover
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, factories should be moved to countryside because it creates
lot
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lots
of waste material and destroy
cities atmosphere
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the city's atmosphere
city's atmosphere
city atmosphere
due to which people who live in cities have suffered from many issues
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With regards to the
environment
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, every person should be
awared
(sometimes followed by 'of') having or showing knowledge or understanding or realization or perception
aware
and should give their contribution as a part of the nation
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They should keep their
environment
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neat and clean and avoid spreading waste on the public places.
Secondly
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,
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they should follow the law which was imposed by
government
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for example
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few years
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a few years
ago
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,
government
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launched one
law
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law, such
such
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as service your vehicles time to time because
pollution
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the pollution
of vehicles causes a detrimental effect on the
environment
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. In conclusi
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, while
government
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shoul
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give
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a contribution
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, public is
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equally responsible for it
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