Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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It is recommended that the higher education

institudes

set up or lay the groundwork for

institutes

should take

same amount

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the same amount

of men and women students in all

stream

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streams

. I acknowledge that for

study

should not be look of

student

gender

in every education department.

Generaly

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Generally

, most of the university has not been accepted

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equal students in every subject because they can be believed that women does not

sutable

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suitable

suitability

suitably

of that subject, but sometimes the girls would fix on their mind we cannot go to that department.

For instance

, security program as a security

gurad

a person who keeps watch over something or someone

guard

grade

they can think that it is only for boys.

Although

this

trades

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trade

changed and

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changed, and

the girls want to take part of that types of program.

Also

, both

gender

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genders

has

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have

rights to get education what they like. So, the University should take both

gender

students admission of the similar numbers.

Moreover

, if pupils as a

student

in early age is

attach

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attached

with

different sex

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a different sex

different sexes

, it can helpful in the future when they are younger and the

gender

issues will have destroyed.

Subsequently

, the students can talk with an each

others

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

and share the thoughts. As a

humans

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human

it is

valueable

having great material or monetary value especially for use or exchange

valuable

knowledge for the

student

Thus

, in the higher

study

times they can innovate new ideas with the help of each other. In conclusion, though, high

skills

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skills, study

study

colleges and the university should give similar chance

for

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study

weather

introduces two alternatives

whether

it is men or female

student

hence

I feel that both

type

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types

of sex needs to take

same chance

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the same chance

for the University studies in all subjects.

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender diversity
fostering innovation
educational experience
enforcing gender quotas
merit and potential
individual achievements
natural differences
gender equality
reducing gender stereotypes
balanced workforce
traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
fluctuating applicant numbers
compromise on quality
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Fully explain your ideas

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