In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. Whare are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

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of buying a
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, a large number people in some countries go for renting a
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. There are many pros and cons when it comes to renting a
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. An Oxford University study on people's interest in buying a
home
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says that, around 60% of the floating population in a metropolitan
city
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are living in rented homes. There can be multiple reasons when they decide to pay
rent
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, rather than paying the EMI for a
house
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loan
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.
Firstly
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, the people who work in multinational companies are coming to a
city
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that has more job opportunities.
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, there will be a large population that has moved to
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cities only for work. These people have their parents and relatives in a different
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and having the hope to move to a better
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or country when they find better job vacancies. So,
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part of the population has no interest in buying a
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in the current
city
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, taking the
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loan
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which takes another 15 years to pay back.
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, the homes near anyone's workplace is obviously expensive and only a few can afford them, as most of the offices are located in the core of the
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. For
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reason, the middle class people have to find a
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in a remote area,
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located more than 25 to 30 kilometres from the workplace, just because it is affordable. They have to bear the
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as well as the time invested in commuting to office, which will have an effect on peaceful life, especially, for the new generation Corporate professionals with no job guarantee.
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, the rented
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has its own disadvantages, like, we have to pay the
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every month which is almost equal to a
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loan
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EMI, where EMI will lead to possess a property in the long term, but
rent
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will not, we cannot make alterations to the rented
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, there is no guarantee when the
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will be increased or when the landlord will ask the tenant to vacate etc.
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