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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

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Dear Sarah, How are you? I hope you had a wonderful week. I am extremely sorry for the noise
that is
 coming out of my house. It’s my teenage son
that is
 practicing band
music
 for upcoming
music
 festival. I deeply regret the nuisance caused by my teenage son due to his loud
music
 playing. I have taken considerable measure to fix
this issues
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this issue
these issues
.
Firstly
, I have hired a sound proofing technician who would visit our home in
next two days
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the next two days
 to create a room which is totally
sound proof
impervious to, or not penetrable by, sound
soundproof
.
Secondly
, I have asked my son to go practice his
music
 in his friend’s garage located on the outskirts of the city.
Lastly
, I have made sure that he would not engage in any kind of activity that would disturb the surrounding and the peace of the
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
. Once
again my
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again, my
 sincere apologies for bothering you by generating loud noise. Sincerely Praveen Raj

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