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With the coming of new mass communication media like television and internet, newspaper is losing its importance. Do you agree with this or not?

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The face of communication changed with the advent of
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a newspaper
newspapers
 as it became very easy to communicate with people at large and spread any message. As technology advanced, mass media like television and internet came offering more services. It was believed that
newspaper
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 will soon be disregarded as an outdated
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 of media.
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, did not happen and does not seem a reality in the near future. I believe that
newspaper
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 is the most common
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 of media connected to almost everyone's life. For most of us, the day begins with
newspaper
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. Reading
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the newspaper
 along with bed-tea is a daily routine of many people.
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Newspaper
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The newspaper
A newspaper
 has many advantages over other media
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 as radio, television and
internet
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the internet
, which can be put up as follows. One can read
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newspaper
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a newspaper
 at his own convenience. It offers a great deal of flexibility as it can be read anytime, anywhere and in any frequency. It is cheap and convenient to carry. It can be piled up, so one
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 has the benefit or referring to some old news if required. It puts more stress on the local news.
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, it definitely improves our language skills. It
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 provides some extra benefits like one can get information about radio and television programmes as well as train schedules. It includes advertisement for businesses, shops, educational institutes, matrimony etc. And job vacancies. It
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 provides entertainment in the
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 of jokes, cartoons, crossword etc.
Newspaper
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 supplements carry article covering a variety of topics ranging from entertainment to religious preaching. "Ascent" In the times of India is a supplement that provides valuable career and management related knowledge, which is of use to every ambitious person.
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, it is obvious that no other media facility can replace
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the newspaper
newspapers
a newspaper
. It was an important
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 of media in the past and would continue to maintain its position for the coming many years.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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