You have just read an article containing incorrect information about your town. Tell them about incorrect information and importance of correcting it.

I am writing to you regarding the
article
published about ABC
town
located near the Heston beach in your famous travel
magzine
a periodic publication containing pictures and stories and articles of interest to those who purchase it or subscribe to it
magazine
“The Travel”.
some
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Any
Some
incorrect
information
about
town
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the town
is published in that
article
. I am
regular reader
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a regular reader
of “The Travel”
magzine
a periodic publication containing pictures and stories and articles of interest to those who purchase it or subscribe to it
magazine
, which publish very useful
information
about different holiday destination and
adventures
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adventure
places for tourists. I came across an
article
about my
town
. At
first
, I was very delighted to see the
article
about my
town
,
however
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however, this
this
pleasure did not
last
long as I found out
many
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much
incorrect
informations
a message received and understood
information
.
First
, the
berief
of short duration or distance
brief
history that
provide
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provides
its built dates are wrong. The
article
mentioned
town
built in 1657 by John Merchant,
instead
it was
actualy
in actual fact
actually
built in 1757 by John Merchant.
Second
, the pictures of different buildings are not located in
this
town
rather
next
to
this
town
, which is 5
mile
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miles
away. “The Travel”
magzine
a periodic publication containing pictures and stories and articles of interest to those who purchase it or subscribe to it
magazine
is well reputed
magzine
a periodic publication containing pictures and stories and articles of interest to those who purchase it or subscribe to it
magazine
magazines
in print media and people use it as
tour guide
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a tour guide
.
Therefore
, It is very important to publish 100 percent true
information
.
In
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At
my suggestion, if you
can not
can not
cannot
publish the same
article
with correct
information
then
at least an editorial note should be published. Looking for your kind regards, Your faithfully, BAC ABC
town
, north ireland
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