Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is always a very
debateable
open to doubt or debate
debatable
topic
wheather
introduces two alternatives
whether
weather
it is better to live in
house
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a house
or an
appartment
a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house
apartment
should be
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
? For
me I
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me, I
must say that in term of living in
house
or an
appartment
a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house
apartment
,
house
has upper hands over it.There are negligible disadvantages while number of advantages are there to proceed your life in
Dwelling
Suggestion
a dwelling
a Dwelling
. Life in a
house
is very colourful.The big advantage to live in a
house
is that you
can made
Suggestion
can make
your
house
from start over and over again.But
samething
Suggestion
same thing
you can't do in
appartment
Suggestion
an apartment
apartment
the apartment
.You can make your
house
from
double storey
Suggestion
a double storey
to triple and from
third
floor to
so on
in the near future
soon
.Like
this
the structure of
appartment
a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house
apartment
doesn't allow you to do exactly similar. Regarding
house it
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house, it
is sure that your
house
is on
ground floor
Suggestion
the ground floor
and you can increase it by length while you will never be not confident about
appartment
a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house
apartments
apartment
.
Similarly
famous cricketer Virat
Kohli who
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Kohli, who
was very poor before coming to cricket and was living in a
house
havnig
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
having
two rooms with a large family.As he came
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
cricket, started earning handsome amount and
then
he enlarged the same area of living.He made a big Garage, swimming pool over there and
also
increase the length and number of rooms along with
guest
Suggestion
a guest house
house
and dining room.While he couldn't do
this
if he were living in
appartment
a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house
apartments
apartment
. That's
why if
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why, if
you prefer
house
Suggestion
a house
over
appartment
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apartment, then
apartment then
then
it would me more
fruitfull
feeling or showing gratitude
grateful
fruitful
.
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