Spending money on art is waste ,so invest on public sector, agree or disagree

Many countries have been spending a huge amount of money on entertainment

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such

as arts, music, and

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drama

since post -

modern

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era. Yet, there

remains

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some disagreements as to whether the

overall

output of

this

funding has been beneficial or

this

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whether this

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could be utilized for other areas of

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: health, transportation, and education.

While

there are certainly valid arguments

on the contrary

; I, personally think that

it

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the fund can be better utilised for

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pressing issues of the countries. First of all, it is

indisputable

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fact that public sectors,

for example

, health, education, and transportation require urgent attention since these areas

directly

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related to day to day life of

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common man. Despite the benefits of

granding

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raising

funds for

entertainment

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the entertainment

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industry- a basic advantage may be providing relaxation and soothing

effets

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effects

- a

singnificant propotion

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significant proportion

of society would have deeply benefited

frrom

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from

this

. Those who live in

eonomically

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economically

deprived

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,

moreover

, value something which enhances their standard of living rather than any luxury.

Additionally

, and even more importantly, investing funds

on

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these

publc

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public

infra- stractures

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infrastructures

not only

bring

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positives to citizens but

also

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as a whole.

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,

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developments

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of these would facilitate to

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well- known investors

as well as

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multi-national

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companies which eventually leads to economic empowerment of the nation.

By contrast

, if focus

given

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to either arts or music, that would include only a fraction of the society, it would not

accelarate

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accelerate

country's

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the country's

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total advancement.

Therefore

, I contend that

this

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invetments

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investment

investments

have generally

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results. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that funding for

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developments

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development

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of

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public structure

have

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far reachable merits than supporting entertainment programs.