Dogs are the most popular pets in the world, yet many would say it is inappropriate to have them in built-up inner city areas. Do you agree or disagree ?

Human being
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The human being
have been keeping
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has been keeping
dogs as pets for ages. I
reackon
expect, believe, or suppose
reckon
reckoned
that dogs should not be kept by the people in the inner -built city areas
Firstly
, urban areas are
conjested
overfull as with blood
congested
contested
thereby dogs do not get appropriate environment.
This
is harmful for not only the
dogs but
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dogs, but
also
for masters. On the one side, the animal
get
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gets
physically weaker due to lack of physical activities in
conjested place
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the congested place
congested place
. It has been found that majority of dogs who are
temped
press down tightly
tamped
in the cities become victim of physical
dissorder
a physical condition in which there is a disturbance of normal functioning
disorder
disorders
like curve legs.
On the other hand
, it is true that masters are prone to diseases who keep pets. The hairs of the animal can be the cause of an allergy and so many other diseases like
toxoplamosis
. In
villages
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village
dogs
have an open area but cities are
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was an open area, but cities
was an open area but cities
is an open area but cities
has an open area but cities been
is an open area but cities being
was an open area but cities being
conjusted
overfull as with blood
congested
dogs should not be comfortable in urban areas.
Secondly
, dogs can be the cause of disturbance in cities. There is no
deniying
declare untrue; contradict
denying
that dogs create
nuisence
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a nuisance
nuisance
by barking and other activities as well. People are
extreamly
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
busy in
cities
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the cities
, they work in day and night shifts and dogs might disturb not only the
masters but
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masters, but
also
the neighbours by its
activites
any specific behavior
activities
,
hence
these should not be kept in the inner built city areas. In conclusion, cities are
conjested
overfull as with blood
congested
contested
, thereby pets like dogs can
have physical disorder
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have a physical disorder
and these dogs can disturb the residents as well. It is kept by city people in the inner built areas.

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