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Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is negative or a positive development ?

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Due to computer
technology
 become more affordable the vast majority of adults will
work
 on a distance and the same as students will
study
 from home all over the world. In my opinion, I believe that there are some benefits if that kind of privileges are limited.
However
, permitting
work
 in a distance cause a lot of problems for society and
this
 option can destroy communication between people. Nowadays, with the advancement of
technology
, there are varied opportunities in many sectors to use that
technology
 for getting benefits.
Work
 and
study
 have numerous developments where
their
in or at that place
there
 can reach good results. In my point of view, I believe that
such
 kind of privilege should be used only for people with disabilities, people who has struggled
to
Suggestion
with
 coming to the office every time, people who has deceased. The companies have to go out to a meeting and organize all things, conditions if the person willing to
work
.
Moreover
, that kind of initiate will increase the workforce and gives the mental strength to the disabled community that they are not alone and life is not ended.
Nevertheless
, working in distance should be limited in
work
 and
study
 sectors. Because these people will interrupted at home by someone throughout the days.
Hence
, productivity will get down moderately over and over.
Although
, we are all humans and we all like good condition and comfort zone. These conditions should be caused laziness. Whatever the situation is, people should be part of society and have to communicate with others. In conclusion, it is clearly evident that computer
technology
 is growing and not using them will be silly.
Consequently
, computer
technology
 can be used for both sector
work
 and
study
, but with some requirement and criteria.
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