some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Most people think
that is
better to accept any work,
instead
of being without a payslip. On the other side, we have humans who will do everything to make thinks better and they do not accept anything what does make them happy.
This
essay, will explain both views and my opinion why I choose happiness and satisfaction
instead
of pure
job
.
Firstly
, it is hard to judge someone because he or she decide to accept bad
job
and sacrifices own happiness.
This
decision
can be driven by some higher reason. As an example
,
Accept space
,
persons near family member have some illness and need urgent help. On
this
occasion, I am supporting
decision
to do everything
instead
to be selfish and try to find a better place to work. A
second
group of people, will do everything to make things better and strive to do more for their satisfaction and success. Most time we can see young people, who are forcing themselves to the highest standards.
This
energy we can see mostly in highly educated groups which want transfer oven passion and enthusiasm in the work environment for personal presentation. In my opinion they need to companies engine and motivator same as future leads, but they need to accept that they still have a lot to learn. Generally speaking,
decision
about accepting or not bad, working place or fight for the ideal
job
stays only on each of us. Many
controversal
marked by or capable of arousing controversy
controversial
decision
Suggestion
decisions
we can see around us, and sometimes
also
many
time
Suggestion
times
what sounds as best
oportunitiy
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
can lead as
worstes
Suggestion
waste
wastes
nightmare.
Also
, sometimes we can see
oposite
being directly across from each other; facing
opposite
, when people take a
job
becasue
for the reason that; on account of
because
they need one and
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
this
change
ther
of them or themselves
their
her
life to
better way
Suggestion
a better way
the better way
. In my
opinion sometimes
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opinion, sometimes
we need to live life to drive us,
instead that
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instead, that
we are pushing to
chage
cause to change; make different; cause a transformation
change
everithing
all things
everything
around us.
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  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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