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In the past, museums stored information about culture and history. However, nowadays this information can be found through the Internet, so there is no need for museums. Do you agree or disagree with this view

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With the advent of the internet, details regarding culture and history previously preserved in the repositories have been easily accessible thereby rendering the museums redundant.
This
 essay will oppose
this
 view and buttress the relevance of the museum to the general populace.
To begin
 with, the place of
exhibition
Suggestion
the exhibition
 has a collection of artefacts that can only be appreciated by physically seeing them.
This
 helps to tell the story of the evolution of the community which cannot be captured while viewing online.
For instance
, in the eastern part of Nigeria, there is the Ogbunike cave which tells the story of the civil war and the weaponry used to fight the war. Visitors are
also
 allowed to touch the tools and descend into the inner chambers of the cave which served as an escape route for soldiers at the time.
This
 experience cannot be felt while streaming videos online.
Furthermore
, the continued existence of the museum encourages tourism.
Thus
, as more people come to visit the sacred crafts from the ancient times, there is
rise
Suggestion
a rise
 in the growth and development of the country's economy as well as being globally recognised. A good example of
this
 is the international recognition gotten by
Calabar state
Suggestion
the Calabar state
 after the government made its archive houses public to tourists.
This
 act immediately increased the state's GDP and developed the state. In conclusion,
although
 the cyberspace can get information as regards the way of life of ancient times, it does not in any way equal the experience to be felt when
on
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
one
 sees the physical antiquities in the places of exhibition.
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