International MARKETING IS SOME TIME SEEN AS INVASIVE AND AN INTRUSION INTO THE COUNTRY IN QUESTION. Other argue that it is necessary and economical form of education. in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

With the passage of time,
world
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the world
is becoming a global village. Cosmopolitan
campaign
is a booming trend. For opponents it
is seem
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seems
as encroaching approach to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
nation boundaries.
On the other hand
, supporters argue that it is mandatory for economic boost of the
country
as it brings
new thought
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new thoughts
a new thought
, diverse language and different cultural norms. In my
opinion both
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opinion, both
sides of the coin are debatable. As international
trade
invades the local
economy
of the
country it
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country, it
definitely has its positive and negative impact on local industry. To embark on, international
trade
opens new opportunities of jobs and skills, it indirectly boosts financial wellbeing of the local people which mostly belong to a developing
country
. Along with
boost
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boosting
to
economy
these marketing
campaign
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campaigns
bring new ideas, introduce different forms of communication and cultural norms.
For instance
,
English though
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English, though
mother tongue
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the mother tongue
of Europe, is now spoken all over the world due to cross
boundaries
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boundary
trade
. International cuisines are
also
a pronounced effect of global marketing. Without any doubt these
campaign
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campaigns
among different countries provide a vast horizon of different trends, languages, cultures and norms. On the flip side, international marketing sometimes affects
economy
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the economy
of
native
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the native country
country
as
parasite
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a parasite
parasites
.
it
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It
penetrates the
economy
so intensely that colours of ethics and culture of own
country
diminishes
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diminish
in which marketing is encroaching. Native people of that
country though
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country, though
get
jobs but
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jobs, but
on lower wages and job benefits. It
also
reduces
opportunity
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opportunities
the opportunity
of
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for
the local industry to be prosperous.
In other words
, international
trade
campaigns are major competitors
to
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in
the local market. Have we seen any person unaware with the name of Gucci and Gap? People spend money on brands regardless that they have
better
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the best
product and material in their own
country
. So do with the language and culture. To conclude, international marketing though
bring
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brings
diversity in the form of language, culture and
trends but
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trends, but
it
also
has penetrating role in
others
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
country
's boundaries and
economy
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the economy
. In my opinion whether we accept them or not in our
country
we have to see
these
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this campaign
these campaigns
campaign
all around us it is more debatable that these marketing trends should have some boundaries during their campaigns and every
country
must have some legislation to control their intrusion.

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