There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter

Dear Manager I would like to inform you that for the
last
two weeks there have been some issues
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the bus services in our area. We are facing some serious problems, especially regarding the unpredictability of the arrival time of the bus. As the buses rarely come on time, people are suffering greatly
as a result
. Because of
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we are missing important meetings, children are late for school and all sorts of scheduled tasks have gone wrong.
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, we cannot
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for anything, as we cannot rely on the buses to arrive on time. Authority should take the matter very seriously and try to solve the issue quickly. I would like to suggest that the number of buses should be increased and proper action should be taken against the driver who intentionally comes late.
Moreover
, customer feedback should be introduced and reviewed by the bus company to get the actual picture of the services. Yours Faithfully Nure Kowser Rifat

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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