Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that this is a good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent times
sponsering
assume sponsorship of
sponsoring
sports has become very popular
emoung
in the middle of
among
companies.
Although
, there are some advantages, there are some disadvantage to
this
issue.
This
essay deals with arguments for and
againts
in contact with
against
this
controversial issue.
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There
are clearly certain advantages for companies to use sports as a marketing tool.
First
of all, sport competitions have so many viewers, especially football games not
onlly
and nothing more
only
on the
stadiums but
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stadiums, but
also
there are so many viewers which
watche
look attentively
watch
watched
watches
the competition from home by their Tv.
Furtheremore
in addition
Furthermore
, sports clubs do not have
finantial
involving financial matters
financial
sources for renting their field to hold the games or paying for
thier
of them or themselves
their
players and
in addition
there are lots of problems with the clubs.
For
example
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example, last
last
year one of the
iranian
the modern Persian language spoken in Iran
Iranian
football clubs was closed just
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
it did not have any
sponser
assume sponsorship of
sponsors
.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages. While companies are advertising during the competitions
,
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,
they will encourage people to purchase things which
ther rarely use
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they're rarely used
they're rarely use
they rarely use
their rarely use
there rarely use
the rarely use
in daily life
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
many people affected by
thier
of them or themselves
their
favourite teams and players.
For instance
,
last
year the
emount
a quantity of money
amount
of buying
one especiall
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one, especially
one especially
shoes was increased about 40 percents
,
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,
after four
day
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days
from when it was shown in one favourite competition in America. In conclusion, I would not agree that companies should be allowed to
advertising
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advertise
during competitions. In my point of
view it
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view, it
just
incourages
contribute to the progress or growth of
encourages
encourage
encouraged
peolpe
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
to buy un-necessary things, and
also
I believe it has too much
downsides
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downside
in
this
term.

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  • Sports sponsorship
  • financial support
  • athletes
  • brand visibility
  • awareness
  • commercialization
  • integrity
  • dependencies
  • corporate funds
  • unethical practices
  • strategic partnerships
  • communal relations
  • promote healthy lifestyles
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