Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that this is a good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent times
sponsering
sports has become very popular assume sponsorship of
sponsoring
emoung
companies.in the middle of
among
Although
, there are some advantages, there are some disadvantage to this
issue.This
essay deals with arguments for and againts
in contact with
against
this
controversial issue.
there
are clearly certain advantages for companies to use sports as a marketing tool.Suggestion
There
First
of all, sport competitions have so many viewers, especially football games not onlly
on the and nothing more
only
stadiums but
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stadiums, but
also
there are so many viewers which watche
the competition from home by their Tv.look attentively
watch
watched
watches
Furtheremore
, sports clubs do not have in addition
Furthermore
finantial
sources for renting their field to hold the games or paying for involving financial matters
financial
thier
players and of them or themselves
their
in addition
there are lots of problems with the clubs. For
example
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example, last
last
year one of the iranian
football clubs was closed just the modern Persian language spoken in Iran
Iranian
becouse
it did not have any for the reason that; on account of
because
sponser
.
assume sponsorship of
sponsors
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages. While companies are advertising during the competitions ,
they will encourage people to purchase things which Accept space
,
ther rarely use
in daily life Suggestion
they're rarely used
they're rarely use
they rarely use
their rarely use
there rarely use
the rarely use
becouse
many people affected by for the reason that; on account of
because
thier
favourite teams and players. of them or themselves
their
For instance
, last
year the emount
of buying a quantity of money
amount
one especiall
shoes was increased about 40 percentsAccept comma addition
one, especially
one especially
,
after four Accept space
,
day
from when it was shown in one favourite competition in America.
In conclusion, I would not agree that companies should be allowed to Suggestion
days
advertising
during competitions. In my point of Suggestion
advertise
view it
just Accept comma addition
view, it
incourages
contribute to the progress or growth of
encourages
encourage
encouraged
peolpe
to buy un-necessary things, and (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
also
I believe it has too much downsides
in Suggestion
downside
this
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