Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that this is a good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent times

sponsering

assume sponsorship of

sponsoring

sports has become very popular

emoung

in the middle of

among

companies.

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, there are some advantages, there are some disadvantage to

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There

are clearly certain advantages for companies to use sports as a marketing tool.

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of all, sport competitions have so many viewers, especially football games not

onlly

and nothing more

only

on the

stadiums but

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stadiums, but

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there are so many viewers which

watche

look attentively

watch

watched

watches

the competition from home by their Tv.

Furtheremore

in addition

Furthermore

, sports clubs do not have

finantial

involving financial matters

financial

sources for renting their field to hold the games or paying for

thier

of them or themselves

their

players and

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there are lots of problems with the clubs.

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example

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example, last

last

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year one of the

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the modern Persian language spoken in Iran

Iranian

football clubs was closed just

becouse

for the reason that; on account of

because

it did not have any

sponser

assume sponsorship of

sponsors

.

On the other hand

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, there are some disadvantages. While companies are advertising during the competitions

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,

they will encourage people to purchase things which

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they're rarely used

they're rarely use

they rarely use

their rarely use

there rarely use

the rarely use

in daily life

becouse

for the reason that; on account of

because

many people affected by

thier

of them or themselves

their

favourite teams and players.

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,

last

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year the

emount

a quantity of money

amount

of buying

one especiall

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one, especially

one especially

shoes was increased about 40 percents

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after four

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days

from when it was shown in one favourite competition in America. In conclusion, I would not agree that companies should be allowed to

advertising

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advertise

during competitions. In my point of

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view, it

just

incourages

contribute to the progress or growth of

encourages

encourage

encouraged

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(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

to buy un-necessary things, and

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I believe it has too much

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downside

in

this

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term.