some people think sense of competition in children should be encouraged, other believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about upbringing of children. Some say that children should be motivated for
competition
, while other
think that cooperation is more important to be encouraged in children. plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
This
essay will discuss both view points
in subsequent paragraph and conclusion will be made.
To start with, people who think that sense of a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoints
competition
should be motivated in children depict following ideas. Firstly
, competition
teach
children how to deal difficult situation Suggestion
teaches
soliditary
. Secondaly
, It Suggestion
Secondly
maintain
Suggestion
maintains
excitement
and zeal among the children. After that, sometimes Suggestion
the excitement
competition
becomes neccessary
. absolutely essential
necessary
For example
, in sports one has to win and other
has to lose. So they think it helps children in every aspect of their any of various alternatives; some other
another
life
because most of the time one has to deal obstacle of his life
own
his own.
located at or attached to
on
On the other hand
, some argue that competition
makes children selfish and it makes children isolated,
Accept space
,
however
, cooperation encourages sense
of harmony, respect each other and work in teams. They Suggestion
a sense
also
think what people learn in their childhood stick together with them for whole life
. Moreover
, children who study in groups get more marks than who study alone. For instance
, there is a report on students from South Asia that 78% of pupils who study in groups get better grades.
In conclusion, although
there are handful
of people who think that Suggestion
a handful
competition
is more important due to the fact it teaches children to get out of difficult situation alone. Nevertheless
, I believe cooperation helps children more to become a successful person in life
.Submitted by saifuddin.abdulrehman on
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