In many parts of the world there is continues coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in sport themselves Discuss this view and give your own opinion

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now on, technology is getting more and more developed so people can watch sports on television 24/7. Some people think that discourages the young from taking part in

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themselves because they will be satisfied with just watching

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. I don’t agree with

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it’s very easy to watch sports on television, it will only inspire the young to take part in sports. There is another advantage of watching

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is that you can learn how pro players play the

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, it’s really valuable. To start with, many sports channels broadcast a 24/7 sports competition in all over the world. The young can choose their favourite

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to watch, or learning some sports they’re interested in. When they’re watching the competitions, they will feel the energy of the players, feel the passion for sports. When they see the athletes running and playing their favourite sports on

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, basketball, when you see their fancy moves and logo shoots, you may always want to go downstairs and play a real basketball game. Only inspirations on the young are not responsible for my opinion, but

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the knowledge you can learn from

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sports shows. Recently, if you want to see a professional sports game, you may pay hundreds of d

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for one game, it’s really expensive and not that worthy. Watching sports on

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problem, you can not only watch the competition, but

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the cameras will show you the details that athletes played. People can learn their thoughts, their way to deal with different situations. If one player shoots an amazing shoot when you are watching in the stadium, you may won’t know how he/she does that, only if you watch it on

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, you will see the slow-motion and the replay of that move, makes you understand it briefly. To conclude continues coverage of

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on television only has benefits to young, inspiring them to participate themselves t

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the sports, and let them learn from professional athletes. There may be more professional players than ever, people can feel the joy of sports by watching sports competition on

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too.

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