In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior? What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Overall the school students have major issues related
with
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to
behavio
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
behave
behaviours
in many countries.Many
childlerns
without offspring
childless
face
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faces
these kind of issue because of the
sourroundings
the environmental condition
surroundings
surrounding
they are born and brought up. The pupil face becomes
mischeavos
naughtily or annoyingly playful
mischievous
because of the teacher who is not strict enough to bend the
juniour
term of address for a disrespectful and annoying male
junior
juniors
genre
as a well
grommed
neat and smart in appearance; well cared for
groomed
child
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. The major causes for
the the
definite article
the
undergrad to become
mischeavos
naughtily or annoyingly playful
mischievous
is that the parents and the staff who is the mentor for the
child
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.The
child
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who stays most of the time at school is where he learns all the habits that end up where he would become a
child
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with bad conduct.And he would be a treat to the society with the habits he had learnt from the childhood.So the
masters
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master
role is to make sure that the grad doesn't do any action that would injure anyone. The solution for
this
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issue is that the
grad
a body of students who are taught together
grade
should be monitored not only by the guide but
also
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by the parents where he can learn good deeds and become a
child
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with good conduct.The guardian should take care of the
off springs
the immediate descendants of a person
offsprings
that he doesn't get any habits that would cause
a
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an
issues
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issue
to others. The forerunner has to keep
a
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an
eye on
there
of them or themselves
their
offsprings. The student who
does mischeavos activities needs
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do mischievous activities need
does mischievous activities needs
to be taught with good things, so that when grows as
a
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an
adult he
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adult, he
would not be a treat to the society and those habits
onces
on one occasion
once
ounces
learnt can never be stopped unless he wishes to stop.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
at
the earlier
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the earliest
stage it is advisable for the guard to cut the habits at its earlier stage.
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then
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Then
making them undo the things
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parental guidance
  • discipline
  • moral guidance
  • social media
  • detrimental
  • bullying
  • peer pressure
  • overcrowded
  • disengagement
  • disruptive behavior
  • behavioral policies
  • code of conduct
  • parental involvement
  • social and emotional learning (SEL)
  • empathy
  • responsible decisions
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