Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for people who visit such places?

Tourism has always been common in people, but now it has taken the meaning of thrill.

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, while going deep in the forest has its own benefits due to dangerous situation drawbacks

also

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goes side by side. One the one hand, globetrotter are interested in risky places, as they already have safe and beautiful destinations upside down.

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, they are moving toward mountains, rivers and forests. Not only are they finding the deepest secret of nature, but they are

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getting

most

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the most

out of

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For example

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, in recent years, people have come- across very

extinctive

large in spatial extent or range or scope or quantity

extensive

species,

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, concerned person are burring their fuel for a generation survival.

On the other hand

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, adventure based tourism sometime negatively

effects

the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion

affects

people life

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a person's life

person's life

peoples' life

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, not only do many mountain climbers get in serious accidents, but they do

also

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sometime

on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always

sometimes

lose their life. For instant, weather condition is mostly unpredictable in

mountains

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the mountains

; so many hikers lost the track in their way.

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it is

it's

become impossible to rescue them, even worse rescue teams many times cannot find their dead bodies. Wildlife tourism is

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dangerous.

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as, if a snake bit a

traveler

a person who changes location

traveller

in a deep forest, it will become difficult to get proper medical care.

Sometime

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Sometimes

this

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results in patients to mobilize as well as

expire

Suggestion

expired

. To sum up,

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excursionist visiting areas like forest and river gives the advantage

such

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as finding extinct beings, it has disadvantages like grave injuries, which can

also

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lead to death.

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, tourist should think twice before setting out for

journey

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the journey

a journey

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