Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Individuals argued that recently our era losing some sort of specific creatures and plants from the nature
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,
while proponents
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
that currently the environment dealing with
much
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many
more crucial issues than the problem above.
This
essay agrees that climate change
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,
drastically use of plastic bags have
bigger impact
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a bigger impact
on our surroundings
.
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.
This
essay will discuss both points of view in details. On the one hand, wildlife vanishing because of illegal hunting. Some hunters firing the wild animals because they want to sell the body parts of
it
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it, thus
thus
, it has a higher price.
As a result
, some particular type of species extinct from ecosystem.
For instance
, tiger hunting is
prime example
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the prime example
a prime example
in India
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,
as the numbers of tigers reducing day by day.
In addition
, forests are
uprooted
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uprooted, also
also
by people for growing crops
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.
In order to
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,
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
the requirement of increasing number of population
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.
Such
as, Amazolnia cutting and burning down by the
locals
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local
local's
business owner because they want to grow
gugar
(used especially of hair or fur) having a bright orange-brown color
ginger
cane
whic
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
is eaten by all Latin Americans.
On the other hand
, climate change is the most environmental threat the universe facing right now. Sea
level
rise above compared to the past few decades and for
this
many coastal cities experienced massive flood.
Moreover
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,
people
also
dying for
extreme
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extreme levels
an extreme level
the extreme level
level
of flooding in poor nations. The
senario
an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
scenarios
scenery
will be much more hazardous if no step
are taken
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is taken
by the world leaders
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A recent study found that
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,
after 2050 the
inhabitats
a person who inhabits a particular place
inhabitants
of Maldives will be
migrate
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migrated
migrating
to Malaysia and the reason is
significant surge
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a significant surge
in water
level
in Indian ocean
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.
The researchers suggested that as the island undergo
water it
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water, it
would be better to abandon the place.
In
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To
recapitulate, though humans are producing hazards for plant and animals for their needs
thats
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that's
why
this
essay opine that rising sea
level
and use of plastic bags is the most popular
environment
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environmental
issues in our time.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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