Nowadays, adults do little exercise. Some people believe that the best way to address this issue is by covering great sports events such as the Olympics on television. Others think that it is more beneficial to take other measures. What is your opinion?

Lazyness
Suggestion
Laziness
happened among the grown – ups these days.
However
,
Accept space
,
while a solution for
this
is spread the information about big
sport
games like Olympics on TV. It
is argue
Suggestion
is argued
argues
that there are other methods that a lot of useful solutions like holding a small
sport
game in the area that we live or put up a contest for everyone to join in. I believe that there are many helpful ways to solve
this
problem rather than give information about huge
sport
games.
First
, there are many channels about
sport
games, but they are mostly watched by the old people.
In addition
, they watch
sport
shows for their entertainment, the game has not encouraged them to training.
For example
, my grandfather like to know more detail about of
sport
games,
however he
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however, he
doesn’t want to practice like players but just a mean to entertain.
On the other hand
, free
sport
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
and
sport
events, improvement of the sports facilities are likely welcomed by the people and change the way people live.
Furthermore
, old age people can participate in free
sport
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
to exercise to get healthy.
Also
, adults will come and practice outdoor activities with their families like swimming, running and jogging because they feel better and
less loneliness
Suggestion
less lonely
.
For example
, my father
always take
Suggestion
always takes
part in with me when I do my exercises daily. In conclusion, people watch
sport
Suggestion
sports
shows for less lazy is not a good option.
Instead
that opening more free sports
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
and spending time with the
others make
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others, make
physical training more efficient and entertaining.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • high-profile
  • public awareness campaigns
  • gym memberships
  • workplace initiatives
  • government policies
  • tax incentives
  • local community events
  • physical activity
  • accessibility
  • motivation
  • successful athletes
  • broadcasting
  • inspire
  • subsidies
  • regular exercise
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