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The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#qualities #skills #person #world #university #institutions
The requirements that people need to achieve
wealthy
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wealth
 in these days cannot be taught in higher education
such
 as colleges or universities. I agree many things that we must learn outside the school in order to success, but I do not think that the knowledge is learned inside academic institutions aren’t necessary in the modern world. There is
reason
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a reason
 why should students study more about the knowledge of
outside world
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the outside world
. After graduated, individuals, which have
high degree
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a high degree
as a result
 of hard working in universities, are being rejected because lack of experience in
work
 by the companies. Especially, their skills only focus on
deal
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dealing
 with problems in a direct way but not in alternative ways.
For example
, the employee can answer what exactly the time of their partners
arrive
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arrives
to
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in
 the company, while the boss needs more information about their numbers of people, their place
for
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to
 stay or their plan when they arrived. In my opinion, students need to
work
 for part-time jobs, and get more experience in order to know how thing
work
.
On the other hand
, the things that we obtain while study in schools are not in
vain because
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vain, because
 most of them still used in
work
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the work
. Many subjects that appeared in school are related to the fundamental in every job.
For instance
, accountants need to know what is mathematic because the job is
require
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required
 or biologists must learn about biology in order to
understanding
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understand
natural
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nature
. If people
are not known
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do not know
don't know
 all about the fundamental of their jobs, they will suffer when advance
further
 in their
work
. In conclusion, I believe the road to success required not only the knowledge that learned
inside
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in
school but
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school, but
also
 need to study from outside, and improve the skills we obtain through our everyday lives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Adaptability
  • Resilience
  • Networking
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Creative thinking
  • Innovation
  • Self-learning
  • Continuous improvement
  • Emotional intelligence
  • Empathy
  • Traditional academic settings
  • Academic curricula
  • Structured nature
  • Lifelong learning
  • Rapidly changing industries
  • Leadership
  • Teamwork
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