In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, for instance, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

From the beginning of human history, animal exploitation has been natural and even considered as life essentials. While some argue that people do not need to consume

any of animal products

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any animal products

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as food, clothing and medicines, I believe that utilization of animals is still unavoidable in somewhat extent. Regarding to

clothing pursuit

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the clothing pursuit

of animal products, technology improvement has brought us a good amount of alternatives of animal fur and leather. Fake fur and fake leather are currently substituting real ones, as an increasing number of citizens are against sacrificing animals only to look fashionable. Not only fashion items, but

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most of padded jackets are now filled with new materials, wherein cruel animal farming is not evitable to keep people warm. Even if medical usage of animals is lessening,

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, there are remaining technical obstacles.

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The majority

of pharmaceutical companies are trying to avoid animal experiments, but they still are relying on animals in order to manufacture animal induced medicines. Aside from that, a greater number of people are practicing

vegetarian

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a vegetarian diet

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of meat-based

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, but there are unsolved problems. Even though plant-based meats make people feel uncanny valley, they are elitist.

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, manufacturing lab-made meats discharges more housewarming gases,

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vegan advocates say that animal farming is the biggest source of carbon dioxide which captures heat from sunlight.

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, children may not be able to intake sufficient nutrition from

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a vegan diet

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, because there are various kinds of amino acids that they need, which plant-based

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do not provide, that they need.

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, collective efforts are needed in order to supply sustainable vegetarian food and to prevent

brutal annihilation

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the brutal annihilation

of feeling-beings in the near future. In conclusion, even though technologies are replacing some portion of animal exploitation for fashion, pharmaceutical and dietary pursuit, people should keep working on developing better alternatives.