In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems.

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At the present time
marriage
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partners are chosen by
people
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the people
themselves, but in the near past,
this
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decision was made by their parents. In my view, despite those parents don't wish bad
to
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for
their
child
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, people should choose by themselves who they
love
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. Due to that, they will spend
whole their life
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their whole life
together. The following essay will discuss both sides of
this
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issue. Since the dawn of the time, the
marriage
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was
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has been
an important part of our life. Because of that choice of a partner is a tough decision and people have to consider all details before the
marriage
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. In the near past children almost hadn't rights to choose
partner
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a partner
by themselves, in fact, only parents could decide who their
child
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is going to marry. Parents raised a
child
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and all decisions related to their
child
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should be made by them. Parents know their
kid
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kids
better than everyone and when they are giving them in
marriage
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, they are taking into account the character of
kid
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the kid
a kid
. But currently
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situation has been changed, due to that some parents aren’t concerned about the future of their
child
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and trying to give their
child
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to a family which is rich, it is not always fair towards to children. Without
love
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, there is no future for their kids and
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, it leads to divorce. Even
then
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, there are no ideal people and everyone could make a mistake, even when they are choosing their future partner by themselves. People always fall in
love
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with each other before the
marriage
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. After that, their relationships would become colder and it
also
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could lead to divorce. After analysing both sides of
this
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issue, I've concluded that in spite of those
parents taking
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parents, taking
into account all details, sometimes they
are forgotten
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forget
about
love
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. The main thing
of
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about
marriage
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is to bind two people which are in
love
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with each other.
Thus
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, people should choose whom they
love
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by
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with
themselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Arranged marriage
  • Love marriage
  • Autonomy
  • Cultural compatibility
  • Family support
  • Emotional connection
  • Individual freedom
  • Life experience
  • Practical decisions
  • Social compatibility
  • Economic compatibility
  • Mutual affection
  • Unity
  • Stability
  • Wisdom
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