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school children are using computers in school more than ever. Discuss the advantages and disadvantage of this and give your own opinions

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In recent decades, children spend a great deal of
time
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 for using computers.
This
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 essay will discuss
main benefits
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the main benefits
 which help them save
time
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, have good jobs as well and follows by a main disadvantage,
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 as expensive cost. On the one hand, there are many benefits which
leads
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lead
 to increase in using
computer
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time
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 in schools.
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, since computers can support student in looking for information, users will save much
time
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. In fact, with a
computer
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, which connected
with
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to
 the Internet, users have access to various
website
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websites
 in order to get more information,
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 as science, polities and so on, without going to physical libraries, which improve their
productivities
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productivity
.
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, in order to become competitive in
labor market
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the labour market
labour market
,
computer
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 skills are
great
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greatly
 importance.
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 means that, nowadays, companies require their employees to master at using different software, like Microsoft Word,
Powerpoint
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PowerPoint
 or so forth, students spend their
time
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 to improve using
computer
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 abilities to have decent jobs.
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, a main drawback of
this
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 trend is expensive cost. By investing a
computer
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 for each student,
this
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 will put more burden on
school
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 budgets.
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 means that,
school
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need
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needs
 to fund properly for many fields,
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 as
school
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 building, scholarship which implies that buying computers are not
afford
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afforded
.
For instance
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, according to Ngoquyen high
school
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, which is the biggest
school
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 in Dongnai province, in 2018, they spent 35% of the budget for renewing computers just for 9th grade. In conclusion, the advantages of spending
time
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 for using computers are saving
time
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 for
search
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searching
 information, improvement kills as well, while expensive fees are considered as a disadvantage. By considering all the pros and cons, children and
school
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 can make the best way to balance between improved study result and
school
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 budget.
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